In the short chapter of duality that is available for download one of the main characters is Gabriel. He is actually one of the people central to the storyline.
In the deleted chapter his personality was sort of a tortured killer\someone who is depressed by his life. At first this was pretty good and fit in with the theme of duality nicely and the reader could still like the character, particularly after his past comes to light. But I spent too much time on what was to end up as conflict between him and Roque. The prevailing situation was a bit intense but it started to turn into something unintended.
I'll have more to say a little later. Goodbye